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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
It is an irrefutable fact that the current generation(Gen Z) does not
use
 any type of physical writing or annals. They
use
 the
internet
, which is a network filled with everything you could ever need or want. There are stores which deliver products to you in a matter of hours or days.
This
 is an extremely hard question,
however
, I could
use
 the people’s opinions on stating my concluding answer.
First
 and foremost is incredible information. People who are born into
this
 generation
use
 social media platforms
such
 as Facebook or Twitter. These two websites have one
this
 in common, bais. People who try and spread their ideas, exaggerate some situations to make them more plausible. Once someone believes in the specifics, he/she could have possibly been brainwashed. They are born to think that law enforcement is a threat and has been harming
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 individuals.
Secondly
, is quality due to price. If something is free of charge, it is assumed that it is bad quality, since it was easy to make, write, or read.
Although
this
 may seem like the
first
 point, it has other important aspects that are necessary to discuss. If something is free of charge, the author might have been lazier while learning about the source or problem. Since it might have been published faster, it was charged at a lower price, but if it is free a product does not have the best quality.
Thirdly
 is primary sources. When something is read on the
internet
, it rarely has its origins stated on the bottom. Stating the source can prove authenticity. The reader should be able to know if it is incorrigible. Thanks to the community which is willing to get the best out of their passages, they state them so that they prove that they are in fact a legit author. To recapitulate, I opine that the
internet
 is not the right place to gather information, it contains both correct and incorrect ideas and values which cannot be told by their appearance. It is highly recommended to read the news off of papers written by the press.
Nonetheless
, news channels
such
 as CNN or Fox News could possibly be the only acceptable information banks on the
internet
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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