You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers.
The percentage of expenses spent and what are the preferences that people usually buy in a specific European region is illustrated by two graphs in distinct years, 1958 and 2008.
Overall, it's clearly evident that commodities like housing and entertainment detained large amount
in
both dates given. Change preposition
on
In addition
, the majority of consuming items increased their numbers, except two of them, clothing and travel/transport, which decrease considerably in 2008.
In 1958, a small minority of Europeans of this
country prefered to spend money on luxury goods instead
of clothing, which detained a large portion of the pie graph, at 32%. Services for home and person's amuse followed staying on second
and third
position, at 22% and 18%, respectively.
Nevertheless
, in 2008 there were man changes in population preferences. The first
one was observed in housing expenses proportions which grew 10% while clothing items went down significantly, reaching 32% in this
year. Furthermore
, gorgeous articles and food rose rapidly almost the same quantity until getting similar percentage, at 17%. Besides
that, travelling services also
increased their amount from 6% to 13%.Submitted by lufemurta on
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.