You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to make a complaint about my roommate in college accommodation. I am living in a shared
room
and I find many problems with
this
arrangement, resulting in difficulty to work. Currently, I live in
room
505 with a
first
-year student. Her name is Ella. She is my new roommate and we have been living in the same
room
for 2 weeks. I used to have a roommate,
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nothing serious happened and life was so peaceful. Since the
first
-time sharing
room
with Ella, I feel uncomfortable and it affects my routine. She keeps doing something annoying me.
For example
, she came back in the middle of the night and talked
onr
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on
or
in
the phone loudly, which woke me up and made it hard for me to go back to sleep.
As a result
, I was so sleepy during the day and could not concentrate on my work.
This
has happened frequently. I hope you understand my condition and I would be so appreciated if you could re-arrange my accommodation. I prefer a single occupant
room
if it is still available. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Meri Ayurini
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