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People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?

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Nowadays, many people are content to commit crimes again even they are set free after spending a long time living in prisons. In my opinion,
this
 matter has two causes which are
money
 and a low level of
education
.
Firstly
, almost normal
criminals
 show that they have a low level of
education
. In general, these
criminals
 lose their time for illegal activities and they have no good mindset. They did not attend school early due to some problems
such
 as their poor family that are unable to pay for tuition fees, or their lack of
education
 from their parents leading to being a bad guy. All of that factors can transform a young normal person into a thief or a criminal.
For example
, due to
police
 reports, about 80% of
criminals
 have no educational certifications or live without their parents' control.
In addition
, lacking
money
 is
also
 a potential cause that leads to criminality. When a person has a low-level
education
 that means he/she has no essential skills for a job. They will be dropped down to an unorganized life without
money
. From that, they started to steal
money
 from others, from banks or ATMs for food and basic needs without paying attention to their illegal actions.
Finally
, I believe that the
police
 forces play a vital role to solve the crime rate problem of the
city
. The government should equip the
city
 with more
police
 forces with security cameras in public. The force has functions to check the population and the security cameras systems should be deployed in every corner of the
city
, in shopping malls and
city
 centres to capture every move ( số ít) of
criminals
. With
this
 tool, the
police
 can prevent and chase
criminals
 more often than ever. Another
second
 solution is to provide job opportunities for persons who are unemployed. If a poor person had a job that means he has a chance to work for his life and dedicate effort to society. From that, he can live in an appropriate way without coming up with committing crimes. In conclusion, the crime rate is still increasing day by day but there have been some certain ways for the matter which depend on the
police
 forces with technology and jobs proposals.
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