Some people think that children should learn to read from traditional paper books, while others feel that it is fine to start the reading process on an e-reader (like a Kindle or iPad). Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some folk thinks that child should start to learn to read from famous traditional
paper
books
while others believe that it is good to start the reading on an e-reader application like kindle or iPad. In
this
essay, both sides will be scrutinized followed by my own take on the matter. On the one hand, some said it is best if pupil starts learning through
paper
books
,
this
is because while reading from
books
increase our concentration and
also
that will dramatically increase their speed of reading and that will helps them in their schooling
also
. even that helps them in their knowledge all of
this
because reading from
books
indirectly makes their mind to read more and more through
books
.
For example
, a competition organized by the government regarding the speed of reading a particular book from
paper
, in that competition all the reader who read a book particularly
paper
books
top the list.
on the other hand
, some groups think that it is better to start the reading process by using applications like kindle or iPad.
This
is because it is easy to use rather than wasting lots of
paper
and material one can use whenever they want. even though it is easy because lot's of apps provide that at a very cheap price which is conventional for them as well as they provide images that read that book or topic which attract children more.
For instance
, an application like kindle is basically full of new and old topics which is not good for them but is more than good for them. To conclude, many said traditional
paper
books
are good and they should start their journey of reading from traditional
paper
,
however
, due to various reason
i
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think letter view is much beneficial for the child rather than former view
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