Governemnts should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Nowadays, there is some argument
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between train and automotive industries which one is a suitable investment for countries. In my opinion,
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or some technological vehicles have more
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than trains.
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essay would explain some transport
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which have better gain than railways. In a few decades, technology has risen for trains that include Maglev Train
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which you can travel in the air and
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is very fast. But Maglev Train
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is not just increased
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in transport
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so you can find a lot of
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projects for
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, busses, planes and alternative transfer systems.
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invented by Elon Musk. That
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has uploaded day by day and it will be futuristic technology
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, it will be cheaper than now so governments can spend money like
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future come projects. Maglev Trains is not just one example, I can give a lot of
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. Recently all car companies work on
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car
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process and you can see on ways as Tesla that
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invented by Elon Musk. About
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society can sit on their car seat in safety and
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automated
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will solve traffic problems. In conclusion, Railway is
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alternative for
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but it is not the best solution in the future. If we want more safety and
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path, we should choose more scientific
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and we will
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable transport
  • carbon footprint
  • commuter congestion
  • interconnectivity
  • public infrastructure
  • operational costs
  • mass transit
  • urban development
  • energy efficiency
  • socio-economic disparities
  • heritage railways
  • tourist attractions
  • environmental conservation
  • urban sprawl
  • renewable energy
  • high-speed rail
  • infrastructure investment
  • traffic management
  • public-private partnership
  • cross-country connectivity
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