Your parents will be celebrating their 40th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. Write to your best friend, Joan, who is a professional event planner. In your letter:

Dear Joan,
This
is my pleasure I announce the celebration of my parents 40 the anniversary
next
month.We are deciding to make the grand
party
but I am clueless to do something special on their anniversary.
This
event is very special for me because
that is
my mother wish For 40 years they never celebrated their anniversary because they always fulfil my dreams. You are very expert in organizing
party
so I dire need for your help. I am very confused about the theme of the
party
. can you suggest to me the arrangements for the
party
and what kind of games , dance, and decoration we should decide
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Can you help me to
do
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? I know you are very busy with your schedule.can you make a plan to arrange a meeting with me
next
week in the cafe so we can plan everything regarding the
party
. I will be very happy to see you after a long time. I would very grateful if you can come to see me.  Best wishes,  John
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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