a hundred years ago some people believed that the human race was steadily making progress in all areas. Nowadays there are less certainty that this is the case. In what areas do you think the most progress has been made so far? In which areas does more need to be done?

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in all

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essay, I will discuss which

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have the most vital

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has been achieved and which still require more developments.

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with, there are two main

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in which humankind has made

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, namely medical science and communication technology. In recent years, the most visible

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that has been made in the medical science

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is the Covid-19 vaccine - which can protect

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human from being infected by the coronavirus.

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invention seems to take a big step in the world’s disease prevention campaign.

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, due to the lack of organs in patient’s needs, some healthcare organizations have created ‘artificial organs’ - which have the same functions as the original

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and scientist analysis shows that it can solve the escalating needs of organs in the

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few years. Accompanied by the medical

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, communication technology appears to be

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of the most essential aspects during the pandemic age. With

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evolution, the students didn’t have to skip

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by online studying.

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, social media and online meeting platforms allowed people to meet and chat online in lieu of face-to-face interactions, which is too risky in the epidemic age.

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there are a plethora of

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that have significant

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throughout

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time, there are still some

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that need more

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to be made.

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of those

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be mentioned is space research - the

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that was considered as

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of the “missions of impossible” in the past. Even though a colossal amount of money and effort has been spent on

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, nothing has been

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positively in the research from outer space. Humans should thrive in

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as soon as possible due to some crisis that cannot be solved with only resources on the earth. In conclusion, science, medical and communication technology have the most significant

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in human beings nowadays, while some nascent fields like space research have not made much

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. I hope to see the prospect that people will live on other planets before I die.