a hundred years ago some people believed that the human race was steadily making progress in all areas. Nowadays there are less certainty that this is the case. In what areas do you think the most progress has been made so far? In which areas does more need to be done?

There is no doubt that the human race has made steady

progress

in all

areas

.

This

Thought was widely believed a hundred years ago,

however

, these days, there is less evidence to show that

this

is true. In

this

essay, I will discuss which

areas

have the most vital

progress

has been achieved and which still require more developments.

To begin

with, there are two main

areas

in which humankind has made

progress

, namely medical science and communication technology. In recent years, the most visible

progress

that has been made in the medical science

field

is the Covid-19 vaccine - which can protect

the

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human from being infected by the coronavirus.

This

invention seems to take a big step in the world’s disease prevention campaign.

Additionally

, due to the lack of organs in patient’s needs, some healthcare organizations have created ‘artificial organs’ - which have the same functions as the original

one

and scientist analysis shows that it can solve the escalating needs of organs in the

next

few years. Accompanied by the medical

field

, communication technology appears to be

one

of the most essential aspects during the pandemic age. With

this

evolution, the students didn’t have to skip

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by online studying.

Moreover

, social media and online meeting platforms allowed people to meet and chat online in lieu of face-to-face interactions, which is too risky in the epidemic age.

Although

there are a plethora of

areas

that have significant

progress

throughout

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time, there are still some

areas

that need more

progress

to be made.

One

of those

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be mentioned is space research - the

one

that was considered as

one

of the “missions of impossible” in the past. Even though a colossal amount of money and effort has been spent on

this

field

, nothing has been

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positively in the research from outer space. Humans should thrive in

this

field

as soon as possible due to some crisis that cannot be solved with only resources on the earth. In conclusion, science, medical and communication technology have the most significant

progress

in human beings nowadays, while some nascent fields like space research have not made much

progress

. I hope to see the prospect that people will live on other planets before I die.