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Today foods travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

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Nowadays, we are seeing a new trend in the logistic, food can be produced in one part of the country while being used national. While
this
 holds many advantages which I totally support, it
also
 brings some side effects with it.
As a result
 of globalisation, now we are seeing companies that are operating worldwide, which lead to having big supply chains.
Moreover
, the increase in food's consumption enforce us to find new ways to be able to satisfy all people's needs. The top good effect of
this
 phenomenon, now we are having more food with more options in all year's seasons.
For example
, I can find fruit
that is
 growing in china while living in Dubai.
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