Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. What do you think?
Nowadays people argue that
schools
should teach subjects
which provides global awareness among the school children while others think that schools
should focus on the other valuable developments like physical and mental. I think schools
should teach subjects
which has limited international news
as it benefits students
in multiple ways.
On one side, studying international news
bring awareness about different countries among high school students
. Studying news
as a subjects
help students
to understand about
the country as they prepare to study abroad. Change preposition
apply
For example
, international news
related to job openings, students
enrolling each semester and curriculum allow
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allows
students
to understand different aspects of countries in terms of education and corporate life while deciding the country for their further
studies. Hence
, schools
should focus on teaching different subjects
on international news
which can result in awareness among school students
.
On the other side, people believe that focusing on international news
will have a negative impact on teenagers as most of the international news
are related to crimes or wars against different countries. Due to this
, students
undergo various problems like depression and trauma which impact their whole life. For example
, a recent study from Oxford University indicates that 20% of teenagers are suffering from mental problems due to exposure to international news
. Therefore
, schools
should not provide education to the children which impact them in a wrong way.
To sum up, I think schools
should teach students
subjects
related to international news
as it is beneficial for them but rather, they should filter out the news
which impacts students
in a negative waySubmitted by parthdhir.pd on
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