You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter • give details about the concert • describe how you won the tickets • explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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Dear Robert I hope you are enjoying your new job in a new city. As you are already familiar that we have not met for the

last

two months. So I would like to invite you to Justin Bibber’s

concert

which will arrange for the

weekend. The location of

this

concert

is city college ground of my home city. As you are aware that in my free time, I am solving online puzzles. The tickets for

this

concert

I received after solving one tricky puzzle of mathematics. But the website gives me two options regarding prizes, the

first

one is their premium membership and another one is

concert

tickets. I purposely select the

second

so we meet can meet at

this

event. Since from college days I clearly knew that you are a big fan of Justin Bibber. Even I

also

knew that two years back you

also

tried for his

concert

tickets ,but you didn’t receive the entry. Now destiny is providing you with

this

awesome opportunity. As you received

this

letter, please give the feedback whether you are coming or not. But I am confident that you will be there. Waiting for your reply. Take care, See you soon Warm Wishes Akshay Thakare

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

206 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

concert details
artist/band name
date and time
location
guest performances
unique venue
concert theme
contest
raffle
promotion
shared interests
past experiences
attending concerts together
personal reasons
winning tickets

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You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter • give details about the concert • describe how you won the tickets • explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Employers should give holidays of at least one month to employees to encourage them to perform better at workplace. To what extent do you agree or disagree?