An English speaking friend wants to spend a two-weeks holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring
Dear Ahmad,
I hope you're doing well and glad to know that you're planning to visit Pakistan. It's been a long time since we met each other. I wish that you stay with me but my home is far away from the
city
and staying there could cause problems with travelling to the city
.
But I'm pleasedto
inform you that one of my friend's Correct your spelling
pleased to
apartment
is situated in a Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
well-know
area of the Correct your spelling
well-known
city
. I'm sure it will suits
you because of the easy access towards the main Change the verb form
suit
artactions
of the Correct your spelling
attractions
art actions
city
In addition
. I would also
like to recommend that while
visiting different places be aware of strangers and don't trust anyone whom you don't know. I'll try my best to join you as soon as possible.
Furthermore
, please bring with you some clothes suitable for the winter season because it is too cold nowadays.
Let me inform you about your aracanival
date and time so that I can be able to receive you at the airport. I hope It will be a memorable trip and you will enjoy the simplicity and amazing hospitality of the people of Pakistan.
take care.
Yours Sincerely,
Kunwar.Correct your spelling
arrival
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Language Precision
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Tense Consistency
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Typographical & Structure
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Tone
The greeting and closing of the letter are friendly and appropriate, creating a welcoming tone.
Task Achievement
You successfully addressed all parts of the task: offering a place to stay, giving advice, and informing about the weather/clothing.
Content Relevance
The advice given, especially about being cautious of strangers and the weather-related clothing, is practical and thoughtful.