Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present day, endangered

species

is one of the most noticeable

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that everyone should recognize.

However

, the majority of people think that all

animals

which live in the forest must be conserved, but others argue that

this

issue must be set priority in some types.

This

essay will explore debates for both sides and write my point of view. On the one hand, citizens

who

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believe that

protection

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the protection

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entire of

the

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wild

animals

is the most essential topic because they are important for

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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.

Moreover

, all

of

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animals

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the animals

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make

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completely

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system and control

population

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the population

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of some

creature

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creatures

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.

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, the predator and bait control the equality in that area. If some

group

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decrease or become extinct,

it

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they

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will have a problem like overpopulation and

luck

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lack

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of food.

Likewise

, all wild

animals

are one

of

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resource that

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affects

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on

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everyone because

human

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apply

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benefit from them.

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, when the environment is

perfect

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condition,

human-being

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human beings

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are happy too.

On the other hand

, someone who

think

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differently,

they

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desire

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to defend some variants. Only endangered

species

must be kept because common types have several populations and

not

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do not

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impact on

ecological

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ecology

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.

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, in some

season

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seasons

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, some types of wild

animals

are hunted for sport.

Furthermore

, some

group

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groups

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of

animals

are alien

species

and

not

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do not

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matter for

conserving

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conservation

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. So, they must eliminate

for controlling

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to control

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population

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the population

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and in order to not affect

with

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local

species

. In conclusion, I agree with

this

statement because every animal is as important as each other. Governments and individuals should collaborate to ensure wild

animals

are not unduly threatened by human progress.