Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is thought by someone that the best way to improve our lives is to try something new. Others believe that only familiar activities can offer an expected quality of service and positive emotions. In my opinion, I believe that new things should be inserted
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our
life
in order to broaden our horizons and expand
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. On the
one
hand, some people believe that our
life
cannot be improved when our background is limited by the sorts of things that are familiar to us and I support them. Unfortunately, going beyond our expectations is difficult.
However
, doing exactly
this
can offer us a new
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experience.
For example
, visiting the same hotel every year during our vacations closes the possibility of finding a better
one
.
Furthermore
, if all people have been limited by a known environment, it would slow down progress. What I mean by
this
is that there would be no desire to buy a modern device if an old-fashioned
one
is still usable.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that our expectations can be spoiled by an unpredictable quality of service in unknown places. Undesirable taste of food, the speed of reaction to someone’s requests, or even an unpleasant view from a hotel room can add
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destruction in absolutely predictable
life
. Another reason to avoid new things is that you cannot plan your activities.
For instance
, a room in a modern hotel can be much worse and there would be only
one
desire to come back to your
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one
. In conclusion, while some people find unacceptable the idea of investigating something new, I believe that it can erase the limitations of our
life
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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