The best way to solve world’s environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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century, there are many factors that lead to

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environmental problem.

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, some people suppose that the best way to solve

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problem is to increase the cost of

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for cars and other transportations. As far as I am concerned, I partly disagree with that idea. Indeed, the increase

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the cost of

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for cars and other vehicles can lead to the reduction of the expenditure. When the cost is more expensive than people’s finances , they have a tendency to find other fuels that are affordable.

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,

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restricts the pollution of

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for transportations

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as petrol. Compared to other solutions, it is the most practical way to directly improve the environment.

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, some people argue that

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way is not optimal to reduce the spending of

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.

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, it is necessary that the government should come up with stricter laws about the

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of transportation.

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, they need to promulgate more administrative laws for the polluted

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which eliminate numerous CO2 or harmful substances for the environment. In some developed countries

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as Europe, they forbid transportations that negatively affects the ecosystem , especially trucks.

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, the government should cooperate with the media to organize more campaigns to advance the awareness of citizens. Currently, they are exploring a number of new fuels that would

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be detrimental

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for vehicles and it is more environmentally friendly. In conclusion, the growth of the price of

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for cars or other vehicles has some limitations.

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, there must be a more acceptable solution to improve the environment.