Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It may seem that the
environmental
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should be realized the most significant
problem
in order to shield the disaster. The majority of
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inadequately
with
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this
issue. In
this
essay, I absolutely agree with
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topic.
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, I will provide detail with
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sampler
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from my experience. Owning to the fact that several environmental arise from some human which it depends on their personal habits.
Firstly
, the trait of a person who
selfish
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and
focus
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only
own
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benefits.
Therefore
,
this
clique seeks to obtain every advantage from all
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on the earth and take no heed of becoming the nature
problem
.
For example
, some enormous industry brings a lot of ores for utilizing in their factory and destroying that area.
Likewise
, the negligent person always makes the
problem
in society and turn a deaf ear to regulation
such
as they throw away the rubbish into
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. On the one hand, some people believe that do not give the environment much thought at the present because it does not affect
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their daily life.
Additionally
, all of
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will erupt in
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fifty years. So, many human-being
are
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ignorant
with
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this
situation and want
this
problem
should be
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responsibility
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by
government
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or huge
organization
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. To illustrate, in the
last
year, pollution and greenhouse effect gas had occurred when some agriculture
worker
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brunt their paddle filed at the end of
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season.
Then
, they wanted the government
solving
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this
circumstance. In conclusion, there are many people who are less
awareness
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of the
nature
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crisis. All of countries population should realize and change their habit to attention more.
Finally
, if we have contemplation more than
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past times, our world will more livable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritize
  • immediate needs
  • connect with
  • distant
  • abstract
  • economic considerations
  • growing awareness
  • active participation
  • initiatives
  • movements
  • impacts
  • well-being
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