Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Today we are surrounded by advertisements all over the place. We see them in newspapers, Television, the Internet and on the walls.
Additionally
, as every day new organizations are coming into the competition so, customers tend to be influenced by them. I strongly feel that consumers are influenced by whatever they see.
In addition
to ,
this
it is said that human beings are greatly influenced by whatever they see and hear on daily basis. In order to influence the public companies present advertisements in
such
a way that it inspires them to use them. For ,instance in the promotion of cars actors drive the car at a speed of 120 km per hour which attract youngsters to buy that car.
However
, there are some products which are presented to the general public
such
as fast foods and cold drinks which are not good for their health.
In addition
to
this
producers ask big actors to act in the bulletin so, that they can attract a lot more people to buy it. For, example big film stars act in the bulletin of Pizza and burgers which influence young children to eat them. According to my view if we want to save future generations from the bad influence of ads
then
authorities need to make some laws so, that they don't affect the lives of innocent citizens. In the I will conclude by saying that
although
the majority of the companies will keep on making the ads and posters it is our responsibility to buy those things which are good for us and refuse the other things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advertising campaign
  • celebrity endorsement
  • psychological manipulation
  • emotional appeal
  • targeted advertisement
  • digital marketing
  • social proof
  • peer review
  • consumer trust
  • brand loyalty
  • misleading advertisement
  • government regulation
  • consumer protection
  • media literacy
  • ad-blocker
  • privacy settings
  • informed choice
  • critical thinking
  • marketing tactics
  • consumer awareness
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