A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter • tell your friend you understand the problem • explain what happened to you in the past • suggest possible solutions to the problem

Dear Jerry, I hope you are healthy and safe. I have received your letter yesterday. In your ,letter you asked for some suggestions about a problem at
work
. Today, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that, I have had
also
a similar problem,
thus
, I will suggest you some solution. To embark with, as you know that, I am
also
a service holder. I have been doing the job for five years. Now I have enough experience, that, how I have to do
work
appropriately.
In addition
, when I
first
joined a bank I was nervous, about the environment, colleagues and about my responsibilities, I think you
also
feel the same.
Moreover
, as I was a fresher, when I start my
first
bank job, I did not have computer skills and I was not comfortable with my colleagues,
thus
, I had to face many problems like you. Though you are very knowledgeable, yet you have to be very hard working to get success.
Furthermore
, I would like to give you some opinion, I think you should be very punctual and friendly. In order to get a comfortable ,environment you have to consider your
work
as your best friend. Over and above, you should always have to be very attentive to
work
.
Last
but not the least, if you add some extra qualifications to your CV, it will be helpful for you, like, English course, computer programming and so o. I hope my suggestion will be helpful for you, and you will overcome your problem. No more today, if you need any other help please let me know. With love, Irin.
Submitted by Zannatul Irin on

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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