There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you,about what we are encountering in our area regarding bus
service
realibility
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reliability
this
past two weeks. Let me explain the situation.We started having problems
,
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since our bus
service
was coming late.
This
past two weeks it came 8:20am from its regular time 7:45am.
Therefore
it has an impact on our job performance especially on punctuality.Since we need to be ontime we have to hire a ride and paid higher fee. Kindly call attention of your
service
provider to be on time.If possible please provide us 2 buses to
service
us during the morning shift. Thank you for your consideration, Faithfully yours, Evan
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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