You want to hold a surprise party for a friend who is visiting his home town after a long time from a foreign country. Write a letter to a common friend asking for his help in organizing the party and in your letter: Write the reasons for organizing the party Describe when, where and how you would be organizing the party Ask your friend to meet you in person for further discussions

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Dear David, How are you, man? How's it going? Long time, no see, huh. I hope you're doing well. I am writing

this

letter to tell you that our best buddy, Mohit, is returning to India after completing his 5-year project and I am planning to give him a surprise homecoming

party

as he would have missed our traditional Indian cuisine. I can't wait to meet him.I want you to please help me organise

this

party

. I have finalised the venue. We will be having a

party

at my farmhouse just outside my house on the upcoming weekend. I want you to please take care of the decorations while I will be handling the catering services.

Also

, send the invitation to his family. At

last

, meet me on a Saturday morning I will explain to you more information about the

party

.We will have

such

a blast at

this

reunion. Yours lovingly, Aman Asati

Submitted by amanasati77 on Wed Jan 05 2022

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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