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Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view. Opinion, for and against essay

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The library is always an important part of life as it provides education and knowledge for everyone, especially students and scholars. Though, some claim that
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 would be useless if it requires payment because these days, technology can help people to access a variety of sources.
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, the
money
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 can be used to supply more quality, informational
books
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 and pay for services. Personally, I support the idea that
libraries
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 should be free.
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 with, the charges that users pay to public
libraries
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 are almost entirely spent on their benefits like services with librarians and cleaners, providing them
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 best place to enjoy the
books
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.
Library
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 is an absolutely quiet and peaceful place for those who want silence to focus on their
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 and business without interruption.
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, most of the
money
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 is used to supply
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 and raise the diversity of topics.
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, paying to read the requested articles will provide consumers with more information and knowledge.
On the other hand
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, the Internet now plays a vital role. Everything is available in a couple of seconds by pressing a few buttons, and there is no need to go searching for a
book
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 in a huge library with lots of
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.
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, the younger generations argue that
libraries
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 are unnecessary and old-fashioned and that individuals should not spend
money
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 on them because every
book
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 is available on the Internet. On the online searching web, people can
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 see the
books
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’ feedback that might be useful for them to find the good one.
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, they do not need to waste their time on an underrated
book
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.
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, rather than waste
money
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 on a
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 that will be returned later, it will be easier and more cost-effective to buy a
book
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 and have unlimited access to it and read it over and over again whenever we want. To sum up,
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 the payment can be used to serve the consumers and give them an ideal place to relax and read various
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 with multiple topics, I think
libraries
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 seem to be useless as technology grows very fast and becomes more convenient for humans.
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