in many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it positie or negative

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
With the development of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
women
Use synonyms
education rights in most nations ,
women
Use synonyms
started to
working
Wrong verb form
work
show examples
Correct your spelling
while
show examples
wile
Correct your spelling
while
show examples
thire
Correct your spelling
there
their
the
husbonds
Correct your spelling
husbands
stay home and
looking
Wrong verb form
looked
show examples
after their
family
Fix the agreement mistake
families
show examples
. There are
lot
Correct article usage
a lot
show examples
of
resons
Correct your spelling
reasons
for
this
Linking Words
which
including
Wrong verb form
include
show examples
higher job
optunities
Correct your spelling
opportunities
for
women
Use synonyms
, better payments and
good
Correct article usage
a good
show examples
colity
Correct your spelling
quality
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
work by
women
Use synonyms
than
men
Use synonyms
. I think
this
Linking Words
is a
possitive
Correct your spelling
positive
development since
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
In most
countries
Use synonyms
the
women
Use synonyms
population
Use synonyms
is
risisng
Correct your spelling
rising
and
economy
Correct article usage
the economy
show examples
of that
contries
Correct your spelling
countries
are largely handled by
women
Use synonyms
. During
Linking Words
last
Correct article usage
the last
show examples
50 years , the education system of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
most
countries
Use synonyms
had changed
dramaticaly
Correct your spelling
dramatically
and more and more
optunities
Correct your spelling
opportunities
were opened to
women
Use synonyms
for higher education. Most of the
women
Use synonyms
took
this
Linking Words
golden
opotunity
Correct your spelling
opportunity
and they have managed to get good jobs like doctors, nurses and teachers .
For example
Linking Words
in Sri Lanka , most of the healthcare system runs by
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
women
Use synonyms
. Most doctors and nurses in the
country
Use synonyms
are
women
Use synonyms
. They getting good
salory
Correct your spelling
salary
as well as good respect from the society. Since
then
Linking Words
, more and more
women
Use synonyms
joining the healthcare system in the
country
Use synonyms
than
men
Use synonyms
. Since these persons have to do more long shift duties , most of the
times
Fix the agreement mistake
time
show examples
their
husbonds
Correct your spelling
husbands
are looking after the children
Correct your spelling
while
show examples
wile
Correct your spelling
while
show examples
they are working.
This
Linking Words
is true for other jobs like communication, industrial as well as the service sectors in most
countries
Use synonyms
since most of the job
optunities
Correct your spelling
opportunities
are
awilable
Correct your spelling
available
for females. In most aspects ,
this
Linking Words
is a good trend
becouse
Correct your spelling
because
due to several
resons
Correct your spelling
reasons
. The
women
Use synonyms
population
Use synonyms
in most
countryies
Correct your spelling
countries
are far more than
male
Add an article
the male
show examples
population
Use synonyms
.
For example
Linking Words
in
sri
Change the capitalization
Sri
show examples
alnka
Correct your spelling
Lanka
Lenka
53% of the
countries
Use synonyms
population
Use synonyms
are
women
Use synonyms
. So they must need to
activly
Correct your spelling
actively
involved to the
ecomy
Correct your spelling
economy
of the
country
Use synonyms
. On other hand , when we consider
about
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the working
men
Use synonyms
, working
Correct your spelling
women
women's
womens
Change to a genitive case
women's
show examples
quality of the working as well as their
productiivity
Correct your spelling
productivity
higher
Add a missing verb
is higher
show examples
in most jobs. It becomes more economical for the
country
Use synonyms
. In summary,
although
Linking Words
in most
countries
Use synonyms
the main
work force
Correct your spelling
workforce
show examples
is
men
Use synonyms
, it is
rising
Correct article usage
a rising
show examples
trend to
women
Use synonyms
becoming
Correct article usage
the
show examples
working force in
sertain
Correct your spelling
certain
socities
Correct your spelling
societies
wile
Correct your spelling
while
show examples
men
Use synonyms
look after the children . There are
lot
Change the article
a lot
show examples
of reasons for
this
Linking Words
, but the
awailability
Correct your spelling
availability
of good job
opotunities
Correct your spelling
opportunities
for
women
Use synonyms
is the main cause. In most
aspects
Add a comma
,aspects
show examples
this
Linking Words
is a good
developments
Change the noun form
development
show examples
since
women
Use synonyms
are more economical than
men
Use synonyms
in most aspects .
Submitted by mngldissanayaka on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: