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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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 letter to share my feedback on the cookery course which I have completed recently. That was a delightful time when I was in the mid of the program because there I got a chance to learn a lot of things from the chef. He had conveyed his past experiences so that we can learn from his mistakes.
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, he shared the tips and tricks which we can apply while making any cuisine. To be honest, I am not able to cook on daily basis but, Indeed I am doing the cooking on alternate days. I usually try Italian dishes at home so that I can learn more. There is one cookery course that I would like to suggest which name is "Desert Special",
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 program is in demand and a lot of employers are looking for people who have good hands-on experience in deserts. I believe cookery school should commence
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 course for the betterment of students. I hope the information provided by me is informative. Yours Sincerely, Swati Arora
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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