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Modern lifestyle are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think the changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been very negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.

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Compared to the past, now there is a big difference in the way of living. Many think that it is completely beneficial for humankind, while I would argue that many drawbacks have come from these changes. On the one hand, modernization in the lifestyle brings advantages in many ways.
Firstly
,
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 system has made the destinations close, resulting in
time saving
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.
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, doctors or teachers are able to take a taxi or drive their own cars to
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work, as they have to start their job very early morning. By
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, they can save more time that leads to
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productivity at work.
On the other hand
, I believe that several people have been experiencing serious challenges due to
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contemporary development.
First
 and foremost, as I mentioned above, most people utilize private or public transportation to reach their destinations. As a consequence, physical activities like walking or running are reducing day by day.
This
 may lead to serious illnesses
such
 as obesity, blood pressure or heart attack. In conclusion, despite the fact that
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technology is productive, there are still some disadvantages for humanity.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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