You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on the course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Ma'am,
This
letter is being written to give positive feedback on a short cookery course which I have attended
last
month at your prestigious institute. I really appreciate all your outstanding efforts and techniques that incredibly assist me in becoming a better cook.
Although
, there are plenty of things which I enjoyed during the course.
However
, the best part for me still learning to make traditional cuisines .Owing to that fact, prior to classes I was extremely nervous about selecting the right ingredients. But your teaching methods were extraordinary, it made learning so easy.
Last
week, my parents celebrated their 25
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wedding anniversary and we invited around 100 guests. I prepared each and every dish myself and everyone praised me a lot. Apart from that, I
also
started working in a hotel as a part-time chef. I would like to request you to add a few other valuable courses
such
as baking cakes and puddings because they are really in trend these days. I am looking forward to attending more classes with you. Once again, thank you for offering the best services . Yours Sincerely, Manvir Lauren.
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