You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
food was appetizing and offered wide
This
letter is being written in regards to dissatisfactory
experience I had while residing at your hotel Add an article
the dissatisfactory
a dissatisfactory
last
week particularly about the air -conditoning
system.
Correct your spelling
conditioning
Last
Saturday, I stayed at your hotel for two during my business trip in
New Delhi. Change preposition
to
Although
,Correct article usage
the
varieties
of cuisines. Fix the agreement mistake
variety
However
, it was too hot outside and my room's air conditioning system stopped working in
Change preposition
at
the
midnight.
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apply
Initially
, I Correct your spelling
tried
tired
to Correct your spelling
tried
managed
by myself as I have little knowledge related to electronic gadgets but I was unable to cope with the situation. In fact, I made a call at reception Wrong verb form
manage
also
but no one answered it. It was terrible
experience for me as I have spent my whole night in Add an article
a terrible
sweat
.
I would urge you to keep a check on each and everything before allotting any room to visitors. Add an article
a sweat
Otherwise
, all these incidents will tarnish the image of your hotel.
I hope you will keep all my points into consideration if you want to keep a healthy customer relationship .Looking forward for
my Change the preposition
to
next
visit.
Yours sincerely
Manvir Lauren.Submitted by Manvir kaur bhatti on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite