Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, there is a
dramatical
increase in Replace the word
dramatic
Use synonyms
advertisement
. It is said that many Add an article
the advertisement
an advertisement
advertisements
encourage Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
spend
more Add the particle
to spend
money
on unnecessary things. Use synonyms
However
, others and I believe that Linking Words
advertisements
will introduce new Use synonyms
products
which are maybe helpful. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss some arguments around Linking Words
this
matter and present my stand.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that there are so many Linking Words
advertisements
Use synonyms
cause
the waste of Correct pronoun usage
that cause
money
for unuseful Use synonyms
products
. Use synonyms
For instance
, it can be seen a lot of Linking Words
advertisements
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of
costumes everywhere, which usually Change preposition
for
attracttive
to women to spend more and more Correct your spelling
attractive
money
on clothes that maybe are not really necessary. Use synonyms
This
leads to many Linking Words
husband
Change to a plural noun
husbands
believe
that Wrong verb form
believing
advertisements
are harmful.
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On the other hand
, others believe that Linking Words
advertisement
is truly much more beneficial. Use synonyms
First
of all, if there is Linking Words
not
Correct your spelling
no
Use synonyms
advertisement
, Add an article
an advertisement
people
will get difficult to find Use synonyms
products
or services that they need because of Use synonyms
lack
of information. To Correct article usage
a lack
illustrade
, a person wants to traveling to Correct your spelling
illustrate
foreign
country, but he Add an article
a foreign
have
no experience to travel by own. Change the verb form
has
Therefore
, he Linking Words
need
to find a tourist company Change the verb form
needs
which
has a lot of foreign tours to help him solve Correct pronoun usage
that
this
case. If he Linking Words
come
across an Change the verb form
comes
advertisement
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of
foreign tours, he can easily begin his trip Change preposition
for
instead
of finding information about foreign tours. Linking Words
Additionally
, Linking Words
advertisements
will help Use synonyms
people
have Use synonyms
variety
of choices. Add an article
a variety
For example
, a Linking Words
women
wants to buy some new Change the noun form
woman
products
about skincare, because her old Use synonyms
products
are not effective. So she can go to a mall and Use synonyms
tries
some Wrong verb form
try
sample
of new skincare Fix the agreement mistake
samples
products
before choosing the right Use synonyms
products
suitable for her skin.
In conclusion, I believe Use synonyms
advertisements
are not bad if they are targeted Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
at
right
customers who really need these Correct article usage
the right
products
or services. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, Linking Words
people
carefully consider before making decisions of spending Use synonyms
money
on everything to avoid Use synonyms
of
waste as well.Change preposition
apply
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