Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, there is a
dramatical
increase in Replace the word
dramatic
advertisement
. It is said that many Add an article
the advertisement
an advertisement
advertisements
encourage people
spend
more Add the particle
to spend
money
on unnecessary things. However
, others and I believe that advertisements
will introduce new products
which are maybe helpful. This
essay will discuss some arguments around this
matter and present my stand.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that there are so many advertisements
cause
the waste of Correct pronoun usage
that cause
money
for unuseful products
. For instance
, it can be seen a lot of advertisements
of
costumes everywhere, which usually Change preposition
for
attracttive
to women to spend more and more Correct your spelling
attractive
money
on clothes that maybe are not really necessary. This
leads to many husband
Change to a plural noun
husbands
believe
that Wrong verb form
believing
advertisements
are harmful.
On the other hand
, others believe that advertisement
is truly much more beneficial. First
of all, if there is not
Correct your spelling
no
advertisement
, Add an article
an advertisement
people
will get difficult to find products
or services that they need because of lack
of information. To Correct article usage
a lack
illustrade
, a person wants to traveling to Correct your spelling
illustrate
foreign
country, but he Add an article
a foreign
have
no experience to travel by own. Change the verb form
has
Therefore
, he need
to find a tourist company Change the verb form
needs
which
has a lot of foreign tours to help him solve Correct pronoun usage
that
this
case. If he come
across an Change the verb form
comes
advertisement
of
foreign tours, he can easily begin his trip Change preposition
for
instead
of finding information about foreign tours. Additionally
, advertisements
will help people
have variety
of choices. Add an article
a variety
For example
, a women
wants to buy some new Change the noun form
woman
products
about skincare, because her old products
are not effective. So she can go to a mall and tries
some Wrong verb form
try
sample
of new skincare Fix the agreement mistake
samples
products
before choosing the right products
suitable for her skin.
In conclusion, I believe advertisements
are not bad if they are targeted on
Change preposition
at
right
customers who really need these Correct article usage
the right
products
or services. Nevertheless
, people
carefully consider before making decisions of spending money
on everything to avoid of
waste as well.Change preposition
apply
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