Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some individuals believe that increasing the number of sports facilities is the most effective approach for public
health
development, while others are of the opinion that this
is not enough to cope with the problem and it is necessary to use other methods in order to achieve the goal. This
essay agrees with the latter point and will show that although
having several public stadiums can motivate people
to participate in athletic activities, education plays a key role in improving public health
in the long run.
It is argued that the more available places for physical activity, the more opportunities for people
to do more exercise. This
is because they have multiple choices to choose which exercise suits them the most. When they decide to do this
workout every day from now on, this
can help them have a healthy lifestyle. For example
, there is an upward trend among the elderly in Bangkok who enjoy doing yoga in their free time since numerous yoga classes are provided by the government. However
, I believe that in order to develop public health
, other measures are required.
Giving people
information about how important their health
is is the best way to encourage them to have a healthier life and also
to sustainably develop public health
. If everyone had appropriate knowledge, they would have their own awareness and take good responsibility for their health
automatically. To illustrate, students from a well-known university in Bangkok think about the hazardous effects of drinking alcohol. As a result
, they try to quit drinking and persuade their friends to do so.
In conclusion, even if the increasing number of sports stadiums can support people
to do more exercise, it is not enough for the development of the public health
system. This
is why other methods, such
as education, are so important.Submitted by Varaiphand on
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