Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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I would like to discuss two points of view.

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is that it is the

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’ responsibility to raise a

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that is

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a good

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of

society

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, the other

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is that it is the responsibility of the educational institutions. In my

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it is the

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parents’

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duty to teach the

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how to be a decent human being so the can be a good person and

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a good

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of the

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.

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means that the

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have the function of a role model. So if the

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ups are polite, honest, hardworking and everything else that the

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consider

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as good and teaches it to the

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, it is a good foundation for the

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a good

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of the

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.

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school could be

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additional support,

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when the

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have another cultural background. The teachers or the educational system could help to understand and find its way in the new culture. Because sometimes when something

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polite in

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culture it could be rude in another

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only additional tools the main part has to be done by the

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or the legal guardian, in my opinion. In

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it is to say that, the main part is in the hand of the parent or the legal guardian, but I think that the educational system can help where the

parents

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are not capable or are limited to provide the

child

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with

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the tools or skills needed to be a good

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of the

society

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