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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

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Some
people
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 believed that domestic
waste
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 recycling is low and imposing strict
rules
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 by the government is the only way to increase it. I think that there are a lot of methods that can be used to solve
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 issue and legal restriction is not the only way. On the one hand, humans are creatures of habit and prefer to carry on their duties as simply as possible unless they are forced to change their
ways
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. The main reason behind
people
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’s reluctance to recycle is that the
process
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 of recycling is sophisticated and time-consuming ; so ,
people
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 do not want to put time and energy to categorize the
waste
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 based on the materials
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 so many
people
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 simply throw all their rubbish away in the same bin. Implementing
rules
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 can force
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 to change their
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 and in most
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 if there is a huge fine for not obeying the
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 , the regulation will be followed very soon.
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, recycling is a complex and time-consuming
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 that needs full cooperation from residents. Government can encourage
people
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 to do it in different
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.
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, the
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 should be simplified as much as possible .
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, special containers for different materials should be allocated to each family for free, in order to encourage them to categorize their recycled
waste
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 from general ones.
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, the government should educate
people
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 of different ages about the recycling
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 and knowing different
waste
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 based on their materials.
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, giving some rewards to
people
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 who have the most domestic recycled
waste
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 from local authorities can have a positive impact on other
people
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 and motivate them in
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process
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. In conclusion, I believe that the most effective
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 to increase recycling are encouraging
people
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 by simplifying the task and raising their knowledge about how they can effectively do the
process
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 and giving them rewards. In my view, implementing strict
rules
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 may lead to noticeable changes in
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 short run but it should be used as a
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 resort when all other approaches have failed.
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