It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree

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power should use public funds sensitizing and mobilizing citizens

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sickness or it should

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the same

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individuals cure

. Personally, I strongly agree with the view since it is worthy

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rather than treating.

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cure

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is less spending than prevention.

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essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments. On the one hand, Prevention glosses over severe

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illnesses

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, spending financial resources warning individuals has shown to be the efficient development to prevent chronic diseases

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as

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, malaria and

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coronavirus

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.

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, if the world cabinet did not heavily disseminate protective measures to hinder the

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pandemic many people could have

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.

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, more public

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could have been wasted

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crowd treatment.

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, it is the overriding reason for a shrunk number of

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pandemic deceased throughout the earth.

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,

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cure is less national

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availability of medical drugs across the earth healing folk into hospitals use

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government resources.

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each Africa nation allocated a billion to purchase masks, soaps, and alcohol.

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, solely a quarter of

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amount of

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was enough to care

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hospitalized.

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, the spared

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in

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other

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government

priorities like education, roads and security. In conclusion, notwithstanding some drawbacks result in more

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investment

to promote

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a healthy

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lifestyle. It avoids severe illness and medicinal internation , and especially it reduces

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death toll.

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I still strongly agree with the view. I recommend local authorities allot more crowd taxes in mobilization.