Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
We all learn from
mistakes
. Whereas some individuals argue that teenagers
should have made freedom to make mistakes
, others think that elderly people should prevent teenagers
from making mistakes
. In this
essay, I will discuss both factors by considering teenagers
' interpersonal skills
and bullying . I'll state my logical opinion based on this
.
To begin
with, Interpersonal skills
can be improved by doing mistakes
during childhood. It is really necessary to develop a child's creativity, confidence, improvement of decision making .. etc. For instance
, most Chinese citizens give opportunities to their children
to do things such
as cooking, shopping without any guidance. Even they made mistakes
from the start, each individual can learn how to select the material they need to buy. Also
, Children
can improve their cooking skills
and even lead to producing new recipes. These things lead to gaining their confidence level and those experiences will help them to get write decision.Thus
, making mistakes
is a positive impact on the child's interpersonal skills
.
On the other hand
, some individuals have been bullied because they repeated their mistakes
and they never learn from themselves.For example
, some teenagers
difficult to cope-up with their education. So they tend to some mistakes
repeatedly that will lead to bullying. So those children
might be affected by their mental health. So those adults should identify those children
and need to be protected from doing mistakes
repeatedly. Furthermore
, they need extra guidance. Hence
,it is clearly stated that adults need to prevent the mistakes
of those who are bullying.
In conclusion,there are pros and cons to how making mistakes
or preventing mistakes
, affect children
's life. However
,I believe that children
can gain experience by making mistakes
and it helps to develop their interpersonal skills
further
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