A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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Dear Peter, I hope you are doing great. I heard that you are going on a camping holiday to The Bruce Peninsula National Park in the summer and I am so excited for you since

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is going to be your first experience. I believe you are going to enjoy

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immersive experience of camping in a forest where you will spend your significant time exploring the forest and learning important life skills which would be beneficial for your personal growth. Despite these , there are some notable drawbacks of camping.

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, you will have to be extra cautious in order to protect your belongings as you are going to be with unknown people throughout your holiday.

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, sometimes forests can be filled with lots of insects and bees so I would suggest you take the necessary medications. Unfortunately, I have some work-related commitments which I cannot reschedule,

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your holiday.

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, there will always be another time and at that time we will definitely enjoy camping, hiking, and many other adventure activities. I would love to hear about your experience when you come back. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Pooja Patel

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Consider adding a specific example of an activity your friend might enjoy during the camping experience.

coherence and cohesion

Try to make each paragraph focus more distinctly on one idea to enhance clarity, particularly in the disadvantages section.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is friendly and inviting, which is appropriate for the context.

complete response

You provided a thoughtful explanation of why your friend would enjoy camping, along with relevant drawbacks.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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