Some people think music plays an important role in society. Others think it is it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion.

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is the most crucial aspect of

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life

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nowadays and

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can reduce people's stress and depression. Some believe that

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music

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plays a crucial

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of

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society

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, while others say that

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the

melody is the only

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of relaxation.

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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, the melody is the only

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of entertainment and

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can reduce stress and depression. More and more folks use the

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a relaxation purpose, some can use the

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in travel time,

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, they can enjoy theirs' travel even in long hours travel.

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,Indian buses play the

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while travelling in order to

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attracting

the customers,

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, the

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is only the

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of relaxation purpose and we do not give more attention

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.

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, the melodies is an

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essential

aspect of

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life as well as

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;

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can reflect our's traditions, values, and cultures. Many musicians can create social awareness by making

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in order

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people can get more awareness about any incidents easily.

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, the

world famous

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music

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group BTS earns a million amount of dollars

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each year

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around the world and folks

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like to

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these kinds of melodies.

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, the melody is a crucial

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in

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society

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. To conclude,

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music

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is an

essensial

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essential

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of our life and

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can reflect

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cultures, values, and traditions but

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melodies

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the only

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of entertainment and

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can reduce

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stress and depression. In my opinion, about

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,

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music

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plays an important

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in

society

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. I believe that

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process is conducive to spreading our's values

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around

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world

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