In some countries students pay their own university and college fees, however in other countries government pays their fees. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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Amongst the many major social and educational issues with downsides and plus points, which individual have to deal with educational fees for
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is being certainly considered as one of the most controversial ones. While some people fall for advantages of
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, there are many others who beg to differ. They mostly argue the positives of
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a practice. On the one hand, obtaining fees from
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is an opportunity to earn a tax.
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to say more student pay
university
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bill and
university
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give a tax to
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government
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the government
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then
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government
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the government
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use
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money for educational problems.
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school,
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class is built by
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government
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the government
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at the expense of tax and increasing education level. The
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intrinsic merit to
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idea, from many points of view, can be setting new science laboratory,
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project by the
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.
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, education fees help both
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and the state expense money
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project and
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it.
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, from an empirical
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gaining money from
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might have a couple of downsides, as well. For one thing, according to
university
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price,
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most
of
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the
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students
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can not start
university
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and
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a collage
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college
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collage
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college
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degree is looked at, by many people as a demerit.
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means
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students
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who want to enter
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good
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where
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fee
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is compulsory and pupils do not
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it.
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,
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the country
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where
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, where government pay their college and university fee for students,
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government
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pay their college and
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fee
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for
students
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have a lot of expenditure in the commonwealth budget.
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,
the
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most
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student
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students
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have
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not
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no
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problem
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a problem
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university
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with university
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and college
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fee
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fees
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and start
easier
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an easier
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bachelor
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a bachelor
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or master degree. Taking both sides into account, I can safely state that purchasing
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fee
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for
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government
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the government
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has both advantages and disadvantages.
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, after a
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through
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consideration, I have come to
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the conclusion
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that the demerits can eclipse the advantages.

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