There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter introduce yourself explain what the problem is tell the councilor what you would like to be done

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that there was a big hole in the road in front of my house caused by the accident.

To begin

with, let me introduce myself, my name is Emily, and is currently live in Nguyen Thi Minh Khai Street, district 1, Ho Chi Minh City. There was a big car crash on Wednesday, which left a big hole after that in the road.

As a consequence

, it caused some serious accidents at night because the driver did not see the hole to avoid it.

In addition

, it

also

caused a traffic jam as people tried to stay away from it. Since

then

, no one from the authorities department hasn't come to fix

this

problem. To avoid more crashes, I have to write

this

letter to request your action on

this

issue. Could you please send someone to check and fix it as soon as possible? I would be grateful if you consider

this

matter urgent. Yours faithfully, Emily

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Task Achievement

Introduce yourself at the beginning of the letter for a clearer presentation of the issue. It helps to establish the context right away.

Task Achievement

Consider providing more detailed suggestions on how the council could address the problem, which could enhance task response.

Coherence and Cohesion

To improve coherence, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the issue, starting with an introductory sentence,

Coherence and Cohesion

Using a variety of linking words and phrases could further enhance the letter's flow and coherence.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter is clearly structured, with distinct paragraphs for introduction, explanation of the problem, and proposed action.

Task Achievement

Your polite and formal tone throughout the letter is appropriate for its purpose and audience.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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