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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contain some information about your home town which is incorrect. write a letter to the editor correct the information explain why it is important to give correct information suggests what should be done about the situation

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I am writing to notify you of the wrong information you published on September 10th,2021 about my town , Osun State Nigeria.
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, thank you for the amazing article but there are some errors that needed to be corrected in there. you said food items are very expensive In my
place
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 but
that is
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 inaccurate. How can food be expensive in a
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 where farming and fishing is the main occupation of residents? My home time is the best
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 you can get the cheapest foodstuffs because farmers in my town often cultivate varieties of consumables in Large quantities including r yam, vegetables, pepper, tomatoes etc.
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, women in my town are mostly into trading of food materials; which often take
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 at the market.
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, inappropriate information can scare our potential foreign wholesalers away. It can
also
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 prevent potential students from coming to study .All these will definitely have a negative impact on economic growth.so there is a need to always ensure that accurate information is being published. To conclude, I want you to correct
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 mistake as soon as possible ( between 3 to 5 days) , do a proper investigation, and republish it in order to avoid people's criticism. Thanks in anticipation. Deborah Dickson.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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