Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in need. Others however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It’s know
that there are two major Change the verb form
It’s known
It’s knowing
ways
to participate in charity activities. For some people
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,people
it’s
more preferable to know exactly whom they help and others prefer to support
centralised local and iternational
charity programs. From my point of Correct your spelling
international
view
direct Add a comma
,view
support
may be provided in all kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
ways
so it’s
preferable for me while help
via charitable Change the form of the verb
helping
centers
could be done in general via money and clothes donations. Let’s review both Change the spelling
centres
ways
in more details
.
Donating via charitable organizations allow Fix the agreement mistake
detail
to
participate in big national programs and help remotely worldwide. Correct pronoun usage
one to
This
way
it’s
possible to help someone in a distance or even provide indirect help for nature saving or cosmos research programs and it’s
really great to unite resources this
way
. On the other
hand
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,hand
it’s
hard to feel involvement
in the process Replace the word
involved
this
way
and for some people
it looks too easy and not counted as something real. Add a comma
,people
For
example
there are exist bank card offers with automatic small percentage payments to WWF, Greenpiece or Red Cross from each incoming transaction.
Another Add a comma
,example
way
to provide support
is to meet peoples
in person and supply them with money, food, clothes or help with some work. Fix the agreement mistake
people
This
type of charity allows to be involved in process
and work together with others shoulder to shoulder. Add an article
the process
It’s
very important to be satisfied with results
of your activity and with personal Correct article usage
the results
help
you will receive direct warm feedback in most cases. Add a comma
,help
Personally
I prefer Add a comma
,Personally
this
way
because it reflects the internal soul of human kindness and humanity. For example
to feel such
feedback one can cook some meals and share with people in need or help neighbors
to move something heavy together.
In Change the spelling
neighbours
conclusion
I can say that these Add a comma
,conclusion
support
ways
targeted to different goals and both important in different ways
. For me
direct help is preferable because Add a comma
,me
it’s
the true way
to give a hand to your friend or stranger and with some practice
it leads to great habits.Add a comma
,practice
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite