In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

During
recent
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century, people are more
entusistic
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enthusiastic
about their
house
's
history
. They think more about
ancestors
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their ancestors
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and they want to find what has happened
on
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in
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their
house
from the past. I will analyze the reasons for
this
thinking and give some
openian
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opening
opinion
to find a
way
to solve the problem.
Firstly
, going to the new world cause people
think
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more about
past
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the past
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. They lost their nature, so they try to find a
way
to overcome technology. One
way
is finding the
history
of their
owns
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.
House
is one of the most private things of a family. It is an important matter to know what kind of members have lived there from
first
.
maby
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by
either they were famous, or robbers or poor people.
In
addition
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Maby they hide some treasure beneath
of
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apply
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the
house
.
Moreover
, is the
house
a safe place to live in? during making the structure it is possible that they made some mistakes and
house
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the house
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is
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are
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not safe now.
Secondly
, real states would reader sell more
house
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houses
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in an expensive range.They find or make some stories about the
history
of
house
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a house
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or apartment and make
client
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clients
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curious. They know that a good
history
of a
house
not only can help them to sell it in a better
way
but
also
they can sell it more expensive.
Although
if someone really
want
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wants
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to know what is the
history
of a
house
, they can find it by researching between
neighbors
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neighbours
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.
Also
surfing the internet is a good
way
to find some clues about the
history
of the
house
. In conclusion,
history
is a
way
to find a right or wrong about all of our owns. It is important to search
it
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for it
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in
a
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the
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right
way
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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