You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: • Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

Dear Sam, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I'm writing to request you to look after my house for a week while I am going to Punjab.
Firstly
, as you know that my cousin sister's wedding anniversary is planned to celebrate on the 24th of January 2022. So, I have to travel to Punjab with my family in order to celebrate the function.
In addition
, I had changed the main door lock and I will hand over the new key to you. I request you to stay in my home for a week during my absence ,
also
please feed my pet Johnny with the pet food kept on the table in the living room. I would bathe him before I leave, so it's no longer an issue for you. If you find any difficulties with regards to anything please send me a mail as I would always be monitoring.
Moreover
, I have written my dad's phone number on a slip which is
sticked
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stuck

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to the wall. You can
also
reach that number in case of emergencies. Thank you in advance. See you soon. Best regards, JS
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