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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that men and women should have the same educational opportunities.
However
, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal numbers of male and female students in every
university
 subject.
This
 essay will explain why admitting the equal proportions of each
gender
 in every major is impractical.
First
, having the same number of men and women on all degree
courses
 is simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a
university
 decided to fill
courses
 with e
qual
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number of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each
gender
. In reality, many
courses
 are more popular with one
gender
 than the other.
For example
, nursing
courses
 tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these
courses
 if fifty p
ercent
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of places are needed to go to males. Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I believe that it would be unfair to base admission to
university
courses
 on
gender
. Universities should continue to select the best candidates a
ccording
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their qualifications. In
this
 way, both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it would be wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications. In conclusion, the selection of
university
 students should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on
gender
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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