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Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

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A few
people
 hold a belief that there is a direct connection between
success
 in the economy and
people
’s own
happiness
.
However
, it is true that others reckon that other elements can bring
happiness
 for them, including the
health
 and love from their family. On the one hand, some
people
 think that economic
success
 can bring
people
happiness
 because becoming rich is the goal of most
people
.
People
 may work hard every day to have enough money to pay for a hired house and help reduce the burden in the family.
Therefore
, they believe that, if they gain economic
success
, they can enjoy their lives more like buying things they like without seeing the prices, eating king crabs and so on.
On the other hand
, I think that there seems to be no more important thing to get
happiness
 than family and our
health
.
Firstly
, since the Covid 19 pandemic,
people
 have been caring more about their
health
 because they realize the necessity of their good
health
 to get over the sickness and
then
 they can continuously work and enjoy life comfortably.
Secondly
,
people
 seem to have a happy life if they have a happy family. According to some research, the family can directly affect
people
’s emotions because it is the thing
people
 care for most. It is said that a mother who is tired after a working-hard day, can immediately smile happily when watching her son smile at her and her family is her motivation to work and get happy. In conclusion, while some maintain that economic
success
 can bring
happiness
 to
people
, I believe that
health
 and family are elements that make
people
 enjoy their lives.
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