In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In many countries,it is necessary to own

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house

than

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rent

it. The discussion will be presented in the

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following paragraphs. There are many reasons why people are chosen to own a

house

rather than

rent

it. The rights for doing construction is

one

of the

priority

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why people get their own

house

because the renovation can occur easily.

Also

,during the celebration day

such

as Christmas,Halloween or even Easter day, the decoration is done by the owner of the

house

conviniently

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conveniently

than

rent

one

.

This

is why owning a living place is more beneficial than temporary.

On the other hand

,in my opinion, I think

this

situation gives a negative effect on the country. Since the increasing number of new

house

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houses

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or

village

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leads to the depreciation of space, It makes the area more crowded which gives disadvantages

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the organization

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organization

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organizations

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. To illustrate, Japan is

one

of the examples of the world's best clean countries because the government can organize it easily since most of the Japanese

rent

the

house

or condominium-give limited areas for developing and cleaning.

Thus

,renting can access

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better living conditions. In conclusion, buying

the

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house

might get accessibility to do construction but renting

one

could give more benefits to society and countries.