The best way to deal with the rising problem of traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in the suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree.

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It is considered that moving
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from rural
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to urban
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could be a possible solution to issues related to transportation. I totally disagree with
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believe that
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will increase the urban congestion and there will be more
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problems
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,there are other better remedies that will be more effective to tackle
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problems
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with,encouraging
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to live in cities will increase urban population and density and
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will lead to serious
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problems
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.That means,if more
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live in an area ,definitely there will be more vehicles on the
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.
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will increase the
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volume and thereby
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jams ,especially during the rush hours.
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,I live in a highly dense city and I take more than one hour to reach my office from the home every morning,which is only a distance of 10 kilometres.
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,
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safety
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also
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will be a challenge as the possibility of accidents increases when more automobiles are on the
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.
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,it will be a huge burden for the authorities to maintain
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safety
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. Other effective solutions can be implemented
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of shifting
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to cities.
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,better amenities and facilities should be constructed in villages.If all the basic needs,
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as primary hospital and school,is available in the countryside,the population will not travel to urban centres and it will reduce the
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issues.
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,increasing the width of the roads and using modern facilities to make roads safe ,including speed cameras,would reduce the
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issues in both urban and rural
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.All these measures will probably reduce
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congestion and improve the
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of driving. To conclude, the influx of
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from rural to urban
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only increases the transportation-related
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,so other feasible measures ought to be practised
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as ,improving infrastructure and facilities in villages and improving the
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capacity and
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,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban sprawl
  • public transport infrastructure
  • commutes
  • residential density
  • ecological footprint
  • overcrowding
  • urban planning
  • car-sharing
  • traffic management
  • rural preservation
  • transportation policies
  • electric vehicles
  • sustainable living
  • incentivize
  • telecommuting
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