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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Disappearing so many languages has been occurring over the years. Though opinions are divided on the importance of
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 issue, I agree with those who believe that
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 ongoing trend will bring about a more convenient life for
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. The advent of technology, especially the internet, has altered the lives of
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 so that in the current era, communication with far-flung
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 is much easier than that
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in the past. If
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 around the world share the same
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, they will be able to communicate with other nations and enjoy different facilities that may not be available in their
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. Globalization, the concept coincided with applying the new communicating applications leads to the accessibility to so many online courses. knowing English as the universal
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 is an absolute necessity for participating in all of those classes. Albeit in several developed
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 English courses are occupied in the curriculum of their education systems, there are still a great wealth of realms in the globe that do not have these programs. The situation
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causes even the new generations of underdeveloped
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 not to benefit from the modern and advanced online courses.
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 barriers even appear more complicated when it comes to
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 to another country. No matter a person goes abroad for education, business, or just a holiday, communication with local
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 will be a serious obstacle in several situations
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 as training, negotiating, and shopping. It is reported that more than 80% of foreign students not only suffer from
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 in their classes but
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 cannot properly convey their information
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 their lecturers. All of the mentioned problems would be solved easily if all
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 around the world used the same
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. In conclusion, I firmly believe that disappearing different languages that leads to using the same
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 in all
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 will bring about a new avenue in the communication of
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 which would be much more convenient than the existing one.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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