With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?

As time goes by, the facility of
health
care
keeps improving from various aspects.
This
improvement, somehow, is followed by the rising of the
number
of humans, especially the elderly
people
. I strongly believe that humanity will be able to cope with the elevating of the numbers of elderly
people
as more individuals engage with their families. Living in Indonesia has been known as one of the largest societies in
this
world and probably has a large
number
of elderly. Along with the addition of the
number
of
people
, not specifically to the elderly, the government tried to anticipate by increasing the
number
of
health
care
facilities.
In addition
, there are 3 new hospitals which were built in my neighbourhood in the
last
5 years.
Hence
, I personally think that our society is able to cope with
this
problem. In another view, more
people
are eager to encourage themselves to take more
care
of their parents. Since more
health
care
facilities are built, there is
also
an elevation of insurance members. Most
people
realize the urgency of being registered in insurance
health
care
.
For example
, my workplace signs up all of the teachers and
also
their families to a coverage company, to prevent any economic difficulties for our family members.
Furthermore
, the guarantee can cover any
health
problems for the elderly
people
in our family and they can receive the best
care
which is offered by the
health
care
. In conclusion, the upgrading of the
health
care
facilities has made our hope to take
care
of the elderly becomes possible. As well as the anticipation from the government which added more hospitality and
also
the concern from all companies to provide coverage, we can easily be responsible to the elderly
health
care
.
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