More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks.What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions

Suger base
drinks
are drunk by
people
in the recent century. Most
people
like to
drink
beers, juices and alcoholic
drinks
during the day.I want to clarify it by analyzing some reasons and making some solutions for
this
problem. Indeed, drinking
water
is more expensive than other drinkings in some
countries
. Due to
this
issue,
people
would rather
drink
another drinking than
water
.
Although
, at
first
their body do not accept other
drinks
instead
of
water
. After a while,
this
habit has changed to an ordinary one.
for example
, in Europe, you can not find a source of sweet
water
and they should import it from other
countries
that are wealthier in
water
resources than Europe.
Hence
, they should sell more beers as they are rich in producing
this
product. On the other side, in the new era,
people
have to stay awake more than past. They should read, study and work more and more.
Therefore
, they need to stay late at the light and wake up sooner. It causes them to
drink
more sweet
drinks
or coffee with sugar to tolerate
this
less of sleep.
For example
, my ancestors had slept whenever the night started, especially during winter. But nowadays due to having
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there is no difference between day and night and we want to use our day more than ever. Based on health care information analyzes, sweet
drinks
help us to reach our dreams and stay awake.
Although
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we know that it might make some problems in our body, we
drink
them to finish our days later. In conclusion, in some
countries
drinking sweet
drinks
is more popular backed on the area situation. In other
countries
,
people
want to use sweet
drinks
to stage awake more than normal time.
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