More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks.What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions
Suger base
drinks
are drunk by people
in the recent century. Most people
like to drink
beers, juices and alcoholic drinks
during the day.I want to clarify it by analyzing some reasons and making some solutions for this
problem.
Indeed, drinking water
is more expensive than other drinkings in some countries
. Due to this
issue, people
would rather drink
another drinking than water
. Although
, at first
their body do not accept other drinks
instead
of water
. After a while, this
habit has changed to an ordinary one.for example
, in Europe, you can not find a source of sweet water
and they should import it from other countries
that are wealthier in water
resources than Europe.Hence
, they should sell more beers as they are rich in producing this
product.
On the other side, in the new era, people
have to stay awake more than past. They should read, study and work more and more. Therefore
, they need to stay late at the light and wake up sooner. It causes them to drink
more sweet drinks
or coffee with sugar to tolerate this
less of sleep. For example
, my ancestors had slept whenever the night started, especially during winter. But nowadays due to having ,
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them to finish our days later.
In conclusion, in some countries
drinking sweet drinks
is more popular backed on the area situation. In other countries
, people
want to use sweet drinks
to stage awake more than normal time.Submitted by newshazare on
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