Your friend asked you for some help for the preparation of a party that he/she is going to throw at his/her home. Write a letter to your friend asking: *What can you help with? *What will you bring for the party? *When you have time to help. Begin your letter with: Dear.........., Write at least 150 words.

Dear Ishita, I
hope
you are healthy and safe. I have received your letter yesterday. Today I am writing
this
letter to inform you that, I will help you with the preparation of a party you are going to arrange. To embark with,
firstly
, I want to know that what kind of party is
this
, and how can I help you.
Secondly
, if you tell me what should I do, it will help me to think.
Thirdly
, I want to tell you that I have previous experience of decorating and I can
also
help you by sending some pictures of my earlier works. I never left a stone unturned to make my work perfect.
In addition
, I would like to know that what should I bring to your party.
Moreover
, I want to know, do you need any materials which is not available in your area. Not only, I can purchase materials but
also
I can bring a cake as well.
Furthermore
, my final examination is knocking on my door, from 15th January to 31st January. I
hope
you will understand my situation right now.
However
, after that ,dates I will be available to support you. I
hope
you will select a date when I will be free. After getting your letter my feelings are like I am over the moon. I
hope
to see you soon.  With regards,  Zannatul Firdaus.
Submitted by Zannatul Irin on

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  • moreover
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