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As languages such as English , Spanish , and Mandarin become more widely spoken , there is a fear that many minority languages may die out . Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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While there are a huge number of spoken
languages
 all over the world, globalization has made English, Spanish and Mandarin the most popular spoken
languages
.
Therefore
,
this
 trend is scaring the minority countries from disappearing their
languages
 and rose their awareness about
this
 phenomenon. I will support my point of view of
this
 practice with some reasons and examples. Globalization has made humans closer to each other.
Also
, it has accelerated while it had found a
language
 to be widely spoken, so most of the people can understand it. In my angel of view, If one of these three
languages
 are not national in the countries, it should be teaching it at schools, especially in the Middle East.
However
, each country has to be careful with its national
language
 because no one can do that if the country itself doesn’t. Save the
language
 from ding must be started from the parents
besides
 the government. If family members can speak fluently their mother tongue,
then
 the children go to their schools and study it, they will find it the easiest way to communicate. My aunt got married and born her babies in a foreign country, when she came to visit us we were unable to catch up with our cousins. Because we are speaking in a foreign
language
 in their point of view. And I think it is my aunt and her husband fault. To conclude, we have to learn to speak English, Spanish and Mandarin, since those are the trend. But without forgetting our mother tongue.
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