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Road accidents are more frequent these days and claim many lives each year. As a result, some people suggest that drivers should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single driving test, to improve the situation. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of repeat driving tests? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In modern life, transportation is one of the most important.
Besides
 it, it has
much
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 dangerous accidents that
be occur
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. It may damage the victim from physically to morale even can kill them. So driving skill is very important.
As a result
, some people suggest that drivers should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single driving
test
, to improve the situation and the advantage has overweighed the disadvantage, totally.
First
, taking regular driving
test
 throughout theirs lives help the
driver
 refresh their driving skill. And it can filter the
driver
 who has no the ability to drive themselves because safety introduction,
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 skill may be forgotten throughout the times. Some of them rarely drive so they even forgot how to use a car in order that it's very dangerous for other people when they travel it along the road. Some of them are a
driver
 that negligent in driving may be removed. And
this
 idea has some disadvantages but can fix it easily. One of the most things is the
test
 fee. At
this
 moment, the fee of a driving
test
 is not easy, around $60 a
test
 and it may be hard for many people who do not have enough money to pay
this
. For a simple calculation, if they must do a driving
test
 every 6 months, it can cost $3000 in a car life and it hampers the
driver
 to do
this
test
. Taking regular driving tests is a good idea, it helps a lot in decreasing road accidents. But it takes a lot of fees, times for a
driver
. The government should reduce
this
 in order to help drivers to do
this
test
 easier
also
 cheaper
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